Comments on: Please step away from your Mission Statement!

By: Claxon Marketing – Eradicating Provide

Claxon Marketing – Eradicating Provide — Wed, 30 Jul 2014 16:01:37 +0000

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By: Erica Mills

Erica Mills — Wed, 23 Jul 2014 19:07:48 +0000

In reply to Pat O’Donnell.

Hi Pat–First and foremost, thank you for doing the important and wonderful work you and the sister do! As for your mission statement, it’s a bit long. I’d suggest you start with the 10 words or less exercise: Try rewriting in 10 words or less, avoiding the word ‘provide’. This will get you much closer to having something people will remember and repeat. Will look forward to seeing what you come up with!

By: Pat O'Donnell

Pat O'Donnell — Sun, 13 Jul 2014 15:20:39 +0000

Hi Erica, I’d love to see what you might suggest for ours:

Through Sisters of St. Joseph Dear Neighbor Ministries the sisters, staff and volunteers work to transform the lives of poor abused and neglected of our community. We provide support services and direct assistance to help people master the skills to become self-sufficient.