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		<title>Are you writing gobbledygook?</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m a gihugic fan of figuring out if what you&#8217;re writing can be easily understood by your readers. Those readers may be donors or board members or volunteers or any [&#8230;]</p>
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<p>I&#8217;m a gihugic fan of figuring out if what you&#8217;re writing can be easily understood by your readers. Those readers may be donors or board members or volunteers or any number of people who care&#8211;already or potentially&#8211;in your cause.</p>
<p>So it&#8217;s important that they understand what you&#8217;re saying. Seems obvious enough, right?</p>
<p>And yet, sadly (very, very sadly) a lot of nonprofits are putting out gobbledygook rather than easy-to-understand writing.</p>
<p>Most organizations don&#8217;t know they&#8217;re generating gobbledygook. Makes sense to them, so it must make sense to other people, or so goes the thinking.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m here to tell you that just because it makes sense to you, that doesn&#8217;t mean it makes sense to anyone else, especially people who are just getting to know your organization. Nope. Sure doesn&#8217;t.</p>
<p>Luckily, linguists and researchers and other super smart people have developed readability tests. You put in your words. They tell you how easy it is to understand them.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve extolled the virtues of the <a href="https://claxon-communication.com/2014/07/28/the-cure-for-your-completely-incomprehensible-mission-statement/">Flesch Reading Ease Score</a> for many moons, as did our super fab intern, Tessa, in <a href="https://claxon-communication.com/2014/04/01/5-online-tools-to-help-you-write/">this post on tools to help you write</a>. But that&#8217;s just one reading test. There are others.</p>
<p>For instance, try out this one from <a href="http://www.readabilityformulas.com/free-readability-formula-tests.php" target="_blank" rel="noopener">Readability Formulas</a>. It puts your text through seven reading tests and then gives you a verdict on the overall reading ease.</p>
<p>I put <a href="https://claxon-communication.com/2015/08/06/the-engagement-cycle-know-understand-and-then-and-only-then-engage/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">my most recent blog post on the Engagement Cycle </a>in there and learned it was &#8220;fairly easy to read&#8221;.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s, specifically, what I learned:</p>
<p><img fetchpriority="high" decoding="async" class="alignleft wp-image-7317 size-full" src="https://claxon-communication.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/08/Reading-Ease-Screen-Shot.png" alt="Reading Ease Screen Shot" width="616" height="520" srcset="https://claxon-communication.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/08/Reading-Ease-Screen-Shot.png 616w, https://claxon-communication.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/08/Reading-Ease-Screen-Shot-300x253.png 300w" sizes="(max-width: 616px) 100vw, 616px" /></p>
<p>Your goal is for a grade level that&#8217;s under Grade 8. That&#8217;s not because you think your supporters stopped going to school after Grade 8. It&#8217;s because that&#8217;s the level at which&#8211;regardless of how many degrees you&#8217;ve earned&#8211;it&#8217;s easiest to understand what someone is trying to communicate.</p>
<p>I write day in and day out. And I still check the reading ease of pretty much everything I write. Why? Because I want you to be able to easily understand whatever I&#8217;m talking about, so you can start doing it!</p>
<p>Reading ease is where it&#8217;s at. Try it out for yourself!</p>
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